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                                         Pull me,
                                                   push me,
                                              mould me into just
                                                what you want.
                                  You know I do anything
                                                              for you.
                                         Only you.
                                        Bend me,
                                                  shape me,
                                               into the woman
                                                     you desire,
                                             giving me my will,
                                       taking away my freedoms.
                           Hold my hands,
                                     tell me you love me.
                              Mean it.
                                  And take all I have
                                         to give.
                                      Because I love you.
©2009 =ladyilliana
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Number 81 in my second series. Check it out here: Another One Journal

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:iconzaphod-beeblebrox58:
hmmm, I like the poem...but the message, doesn't that sword cut both ways?

I mean...couldn't you, in more cases that realized, change the word "woman" to "man" and the poem be just as true?

this is one to think about

--
De temps en temps,
Le Bon Dieu rit a me voir
:iconladyilliana:
The best of relationships would envelope 'man' and 'woman' in this poem, each person being the perfect match for the other.

--
"Where the spirit does not work with the hand, there is no art." ~ Leonardo Da Vinci

Don't judge me by my art...oh, wait, yeah...my art is my soul...hmm...sorry if I scare you! ~me!

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